2nd draft of music video 

Alterations made

I noticed in the first of my second drafts that I had accidentally got my foot into one of the shots, this has being removed from this draft.

My ancillary texts in the real world 

Ancillary text - Poster

This is the new poster for my album. As you can see the continuity continues into this part of my ancillary, using the same image from the back of my album back cover and the title from the front of the album cover. 

Changes made to digipak 

New ancillary first draft

This is my new digipak. As you can see there are lots of yellow floral patterns taken which have been taken directly from my video which creates continuity throughout my video and ancillary texts. However I'm not 100% sure on this digipak. I asked two peers what they thought of it and they said: 
- I should try removing the images from my discs and instead have the one big flower on one disk and lots of little flowers on the other disk, then moving the image from the disk on to the top right square. 
- They said they liked the back of the CD cover and the front cover, and that they represented my genre. 

New draft for ancillary text back (back of CD cover)

I have decided to change my ancillary texts. I've realised that my ancillary texts don't really suit the ideology of my video, they look to girly. The draft of a back of a CD cover is what I want my ancillary texts to be like, I believe they are more edgy and will create continuity between my ancillary texts and my video. 

Feedback on first draft of music video

Basic/proficient 

Comments: 

-Consider adding an effect over the top of your footage (gray scale/black + white) as it looks like it is simply filmed in front of a wall. 

- When the wind is blowing through the artists hair try making the footage slow motion for added effect. 

- Take out some of the bedroom scenes as it makes the video look less 'realistic' and like it has been filmed in a 'normal' bedroom.

- Consider removing the record effect. 

- The black and white footage over the singer looks good. 

- Too much is happening in the video and this breaks down the continuity (less is more), there is to many different clips.